Admission Essay

As the Vice-President of an organization with a long and proud history of service to the community, I feel confident in stating that, John Doe has proved to be one of its most committed and involved members. Often, soliciting aid for a non-profit organization can be difficult. However, Jack has shown tireless resolve in his own commitment, and also in encouraging members of the organization to work with a greater sense of common purpose.

Recently, John has shown particular interest and effort in the organizations work with the visually impaired. I have found in the past that people have shown fear and ignorance regarding this neglected group in out society. People are often afraid of blindness, and blindness is not a cause that has generated a great deal of media attention as of late, in the popular press. However, Jack has proved invaluable in generating community interest and involvement regarding the issues and needs of persons who are blind. As the blind continue to face unique challenges in todays society, I know John wishes to continue in his efforts, even while attending university.

I would not hesitate to predict an outstanding career at any university John chooses to attend, and am certain that the college community would benefit greatly from Johns altruistic spirit and his strong sense of values. Engaging in service for others is a critical part of generating a positive sense of a common community, and Jack exemplifies this spirit in his work.

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