I got my research paper feedback and i only get 39.5% for it .
I still get chance so I hope you can help me fix it and write a Library assignment and a Pre-library assignment for me.
I really need a B.
someone can help?
Here is my Teacher's feed back above:
Your thesis statement needs to be more focussed and specific.
While you have a few points about the culture uses of photography, the essay needed to select ONE and analyze it in depth.